RE: RNS out - enticing stuff29 Oct 2021 16:35
Here's a few:
2nd paragraph: confuses 'lead' with 'led'; schoolboy error.
3rd para, comma after 'friction' doesn't make sense, as final sub-clause doesn't emerge from what's before.
7th para, comma after 'stage' should be full-stop, then new sentence.
And so on....- mainly stylistic errors which overall creates the feeling that the statement is rushed. Not what I'd expect from a formal doc which is going out to investors, the press and the wider financial community.
(Don't worry, I'm not going to sell on that basis....)